hi, new airsofter here

[Ronan]

Very nice paper

Don't forget to tell me your grade

[AngelusNex]

Originally Posted by Stone Evil

Unbelievable...
Just because a female shows up, everyone and their dog shows up to say stupid stuff. How highschool. I wonder what the average age of posters to this thread are...wait a minute...I'm here!!!!

I know exactly how you feel, when this thread was started I was starting to get angry because if she were a dude everybody would have flamed the f*ck outa her and told her to do her own research.... the really sad part is that I'm among the younger end of the asc users (I'm 18) and somehow more mature than oh so many.

[Crunchmeister]

Yeah. It's one thing to introduce yourself and say hello to a new user, male or female. I try to do that equally. But this thread is just ridiculous at this point. Some people need to get laid more often.

[Vendettaseve]

Its true, All my posts end up in the trash within an hour. Of course I rarely have anything useful to post. Speaking of nothing useful this wont do much for your project but I cant stop watching it, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jFYQwX2EayE

[Lawdog]

Originally Posted by spike666

hey, thats it, all i need is a conclusion, which is coming soon
thanks for reading

Before I make a comment on the essay, can you tell me what course and level it is aimed at, and will it be finalized in English or French. I assume this is just a very rough draft.

Ld

[spike666]

it was a very rough draft, and
and it was for my English course in champlain, its just to show the teacher our research capabilities, and to show others in the course different subcultures. The level isn't meant to be very high it was just a quick project to help our teacher out, to see how he can help us in our research skills.

[Lawdog]

For that level it seems fine. The grammer needs a lot of work, but that's okay in a rough draft.

It only shows a limited research ability (from what I can tell) as it looks like your only sources were the internet or anecdotal. If you could fine some journal or book sources it could be very strong.

Being self-referential in an academic paper is usually a no-no and reserved for more casual writing.

Look forward to reading your conclusions.

Ld

[Invasian]

That paper was extremely thorough and articulate, deserves a 99%, this should be added to the FAQ's on the history and basics of airsoft.

Kudos on a great job!